ImendiaBurzum
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 | Subject: Holy father...  Sat Oct 18, 2008 2:32 am | |
| This is Dark Poetry,,,This **** gaves my Chills. <Holy Father, I do not know where you are,
Never In my life I heard of your name.
I fell from the skyes looking for your kingdom.
They say that your will is in heaven … … I only know that it never arrived at the Earth.
I do not know if sometimes is something to me,
the bread of every day I gain it with the sweat of my front.
Perhaps you never want to pardon to us ,so we never pardon to those that offend to us.
Perhaps for that reason you put the temptation to us in the way…
You did not avoid that we fell in her
and you never freed to us of no evil…>
Amen?
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breakyoudown
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:15 pm | |
| That is pretty dark. Is that an attack on Christianity in that poem?
This line here
Perhaps it is that you never want to pardon to us so that never we pardon to that they offend to us.
Makes no sense lol | |
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ImendiaBurzum
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:38 pm | |
| oh sorry...
this was originally in spanish so i used some kind of online translator...
let me fix it, | |
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:45 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:00 pm | |
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ImendiaBurzum
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:09 pm | |
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ImendiaBurzum
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| | Subject: Re: Holy father... Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:09 pm | |
| and its not antichristian.
Its Pagan/Dark/Poetry | |
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